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For Children's Book Authors

Wednesday, 12 August 2009 20:54 by Writer's Relief Staff

We’re excited to present this information to you! Click on this link http://www.writersrelief.com/how-to-publish-a-childrens-book.aspx to order a copy of Insider's Secrets: What You MUST Know To Submit Your Children's Book.

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Sample format pages which illustrate what is considered “industry standard” for children’s book manuscript pages. Do you know how to set up the header on each page of your manuscript? Do you know where the word count belongs? Should you or should you not include your e-mail address? Should you left, right, or full justify your manuscript?

Sample cover letters to help you avoid ruining your chances of a good read by agents and editors. Do you want to know the secrets of preparing a good cover letter? Which type of cover letter gets the best results? Do you know how you should address your letter and to whom? 

A glossary of children’s book terminology. Do you know what differentiates an easy-to-read book from a picture story book and a picture book? What about hi-lo books? Is there a difference between a simultaneous submission and a multiple submission?

A time-saving checklist which outlines the DOs and DON’Ts of children’s book submissions.

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Primer-Style Language In Children's Books

Monday, 21 April 2008 03:00 by Writer's Relief Staff

When you’re writing books for children, it’s easy to fall into the trap of using primer-style sentence construction. “Primer-style” gets its name from the old-fashioned reading primers many children were forced to read—with exciting stuff like “See Jane run. See Dick run. See Dick and Jane run.” Kids quickly get bored with this type of construction, and so do adults. Whether you write for children or an adult audience, watch for signs of primer-style language in your work. 

Children across America cheered when Dr. Seuss' The Cat in the Hat was first released. It was easy to read and had cool pictures. But best of all, it was interesting. Theodor Geisel had changed the nature of children's primers by deviating from the traditional monotonous primer style. Instead of using nothing but short, simple, choppy sentences, as children were used to, Geisel worked the same 25 words throughout his text to reinforce vocabulary, and he did this in longer, silly, and varied sentences. It's no wonder his books continue to fly off the shelves today. When a child has a choice between a Dick and Jane primer and Green Eggs and Ham, that child is far more likely to choose "I like green eggs and ham! I do! I like them, Sam-I-am!"

Dr. Seuss’s books are a good reminder that capturing the reader’s interest is possibly the most important aspect of writing children’s books, and the lesson applies to adult fiction as well. Check the flow of your sentences. If they’re reading choppy, you may need to create more complex and unusual sentence patterns. There’s nothing wrong with short, simple sentences, especially when they’re used with a variety of other, more complex sentences. Short sentences pack a punch, but variety helps keep the reader—young or old—alert and interested.

Here’s how to create complex sentences:

Combine independent clauses

We traveled to the desert. We forgot to bring water.
We traveled to the desert but forgot to bring water.
We traveled to the desert; however, we forgot to bring water.

Use a subordinate clause

Officer Smith had only two years on the job. He was assigned to the toughest neighborhood.
Although Officer Smith had only two years on the job, he was assigned to the toughest neighborhood.

Eliminate repetition

My dog is a Beagle. My dog is named Sally. My dog loves to run along the riverbank.
My dog Sally is a Beagle who loves to run along the riverbank.

Use the conjunction "and" to join two related ideas

In school Sally learned to multiply double digits. She also learned how to divide fractions.
In school Sally learned to multiply double digits and divide fractions.

Use the conjunction "but" to show contrast

Officer Smith had only two years on the job. He was assigned to the toughest neighborhood.
Officer Smith had only two years on the job, but he was assigned to the toughest neighborhood.

Use a participle phrase

Mr. Jones decided to go bowling without his wife. He wanted to join his friends for a men's night out.
Deciding to go bowling without his wife, Mr. Jones planned to join his friends for a men's night out.

Use an absolute phrase

Bob clutched his trophy firmly to his chest. He left the bowling alley with a triumphant grin.
His trophy clutched firmly to his chest, Bob left the bowling alley with a triumphant grin.

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Common Myths About Writing Children's Books

Sunday, 13 April 2008 03:37 by Writer's Relief Staff

Everyone thinks he or she can write a children’s book—and everyone can! But getting your children’s book published is a different story. There’s a lot of misinformation in the publishing industry about writing children’s books. Learn how to publish a children’s book.

Myth #1: Children's books are easier to write than adult books.

The truth is that it's difficult to write a good book for any audience, and children are no exception. This is especially true for picture books, which a greater number of people try to write than any other genre, and while it may seem like the easiest thing in the world—30 words! How hard can that be?—each of those words must count. Successful picture books must be simple yet concise, and they should appeal to a young reader's visual sense. That is not an easy task.

Myth #2: My kids love my story. So will an editor!

Yep, your kids probably do love your story. But they probably love the fact that you're reading it to them more than they love the plot or the characters. The fact that your kids (or students or neighbors' kids) love your story does not have any sway with an editor.

Myth #3: You should write down to your young audience.

Wrong. Today's kids are sophisticated, and they'll resent being treated like babies. Children respond to rich, colorful language and creative plot lines. Children also love to hear and read new words, yet many new writers shy away from using words they feel are too difficult for their audience. The meaning of new words, if well-written, should be clear from clues from the pictures or the related text. And if the book is interesting, the child will want to read on.

Myth #4: A good story should rhyme for maximum appeal.

This is a strategy that requires talent and should not be attempted by a newcomer. Editors often look awry at rhyming stories simply because they are so difficult to sell.

Myth #5: A good story should have a moral.

Children's stories should not be Sunday school lessons. If you've got a message, let the child explore it through plot and/or character, not by tacking it to the end like a fable.

Myth #6: Children's books are pretty much the same as what I read as a child.

Modern children's books are more creative and sophisticated than ever. Every aspiring children's writer should begin with extensive research and camp out in the children's section of the library. Read everything, and get an idea of what appeals to youngsters. Editors are not impressed by clichés. Be wary of using talking animals or tales of "It's okay to be different!" In order to catch an editor's eye, you must strive for originality.

Myth #7: I need to find an illustrator.

Your picture book should stand alone. If the editor likes the work, he will match it to an illustrator of his choice. It can work against you to send someone else's illustrations with your work.

Myth #8: Show and tell is good!

Show, don't tell. Just as in adult fiction, resist the urge to lay out your theme in black and white. Remember that good fiction reveals rather than explains. Let your theme emerge naturally through events, and let your characters emerge through their actions, not by telling the reader about them. Children like to make their own discoveries.

Myth #9: I could get rich, like J.K. Rowling!

Most children's writers write because writing is what they do, not because they hope to strike it rich. Only a very elite group of authors can claim a substantial income from their writing.

Myth #10: Children's books are easier to sell than adult fiction.

Success rarely comes easily, whether you're trying to sell a picture book or a full-length novel. It's a matter of knowing your market and doing your research. That query letter should be crisp and exciting, and those submission guidelines should be followed to the letter. Children's publishing is just as competitive as other genres. Be persistent, be prepared, and above all, be patient!

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Reading Levels for Children: Vocabulary and Types of Kids’ Books

Monday, 10 March 2008 02:30 by Writer's Relief Staff

When writing for kids or young adults, it is important that you always have a specific age group in mind and that you know the vocabulary to describe your type of children’s book. Below you will find details about the word usage, content, and length of children’s books and young adult novels excerpted from our e-book, Insider’s Secrets: What You MUST Know To Submit Your Children’s Book.

Definitions Of Children’s Book Types By Age Group

Primary Age Books: Children ages 6 to 8, or 1st through 3rd grades. These children read picture books, easy-to-read books, and picture storybooks. Easy-reader books are meant for children to read alone, and sentences should average 5 to 6 words, with the maximum number of words being 10.

Elementary Level: Children ages 8 to 12, or 4th through 6th grades. These children read sentences of approximately 10 words, with the maximum number of words being 20. Most books written at this level range between 20,000 and 40,000 words.

High School Level: Children ages 13 to 17, or 7th through 12th grades. Very often younger children and 6th graders read books at this level. This level uses adult structure and vocabulary. Most books written at this level range between 25,000 and 55,000 words, but longer lengths are found.

List Of Types Of Children’s Books

Check the text of your children's manuscript to be certain that the words used are age appropriate. Using words that children do not understand is a common mistake among inexperienced writers looking to place their children’s books. For example, if you are submitting a young-reader book, choose words that children ages six to nine will understand. The information below will help you to choose your words (and topics) wisely.

Picture Books Definition
These books run from 50 to 1,500 words. Many children have a short attention span, so this length is appropriate. There are three categories of picture books:

1) Books for babies to three-year-olds. These books have very little text.

2) Books for toddlers to five-year-olds. These books are designed to be read aloud and at one sitting. They should have a happy ending. Length of sentences is about five to six words. These books should take no longer than 15 minutes to read.

3) Books for five- to eight-year-olds. These books contain a story. They should have a beginning, a middle, and an end. The plot should be simple. These books may also be read aloud.

Picture Story Books Definition
These books are filled with illustrations but have a more complicated plot than picture books. The text drives the story. These books are written for five- to eight-year-olds. Picture stories have lots of action. These books are read to children, so the words used must be understandable to them.

Young Reader Books or Easy-To-Read Books Definition
These books run from 500 to 2,000 words, but 1,500 words is preferred. The children reading these books are six- to nine-year-olds. About 50 pages in length with only 40 or so pages of text. Sentences should contain approximately five words, with a few up to eight words. These books are created for children to read on their own.

Young Adult Novels Definition
These books are created for readers 12 to 18 years old. The protagonist should be a teenager and the plot significant to this age group.

Hi-Lo Books Definition
These books run from 400 to 1,200 words. They are considered high interest, low reading level. These books are created for slow readers. They contain a lot of action. Sentence length is about 11 words. The ratio of all children’s books published is about 60% fiction and 40% nonfiction.

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Myth or Fable

Sunday, 9 March 2008 22:58 by Writer's Relief Staff

Myths and legends are stories that explain historic or natural occupancies in the world. Originally recounted through oral tradition, myths were eventually written down into short stories. Fables and folktales, on the other hand, offer a moral or lesson. The fable is a short story usually written in a simple form, though it can also be created in verse. The following will help you clear up the difference between fables, myths, and parables.

What is a myth?
Mythology is a collective account of myths. Typically, the word "myth" evokes thoughts of ancient cultures, such as ancient Greek or Norse mythology. Many times myths help to explain the unexplainable or how things came to be. For example, the mythological Greek god Apollo carries the sun across the sky in his chariot. This would explain to ancient Greeks why the sun appears to move across the sky. The mythological Norse god Loki is another example. Loki is described as a trickster and was often blamed for mishaps or disasters in a Norseman’s life. The myth is also attributed to more epic stories such as the Mesopotamian The Epic Gilgamesh, which is used as a way of explaining the creation of the world and humankind.

What is a fable?
Often the fable makes use of animals as the central characters, though personification can also be extended to inanimate objects such as trees or rocks. Still, the objective remains the same, which is to teach the reader or listener a lesson of some sort. Aesop (circa 620-560 BC) is perhaps the most well-known writer of fables and one of the most prolific—this Greek slave has around 200 fables attributed to him. An example of a modern fable is George Orwell’s Animal Farm, which satirizes totalitarianism through the use of farm animals.

What is a parable?
The fable should not be confused (though it often is) with the myth or the more closely related form of writing, the parable. The parable usually has a moral maxim as well, but the content deals with the real world.

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Use Age-Appropriate or Historically Accurate Language

Sunday, 9 March 2008 08:01 by Writer's Relief Staff

One element of success when writing your historical or children's story is the use of language. It is very important to understand the language spoken during a specific time period. Words that were used as recently as 25 years ago are either not used today or have a different meaning than in the past.

For example, the word balderdash was one of the worst curse words a person could use 150 years ago. It is rarely used today.

Consider what the culture and society were like for the particular group you are writing about. Different cultures may have many words for the same thing. A medieval warrior might be a knight in England, a samurai in Japan, a Shaolin monk in parts of the Far East, or a Teutonic knight in Lithuania. Merchants who were looked upon favorably in western culture were the lowest members of society in China.

What is an anachronism? Definition: An anachronism is an event, person, item, or verbal phrase placed in the wrong historical time period. Here is an example from Shakespeare's Julius Caesar, in Act II, Scene I, lines 193-194.

Brutus: Peace! Count the clock.

Cassius: The clock has stricken three

Of course, the wall clock was invented by the Swiss hundreds of years after the Roman Empire's collapse. Do your research before taking on the giant task of writing a historical work.

In addition, when writing for children, check the text of your manuscript to be certain that words used are age appropriate. Using words that children do not understand is a common mistake among inexperienced writers looking to place their children's books.

For example, if you are submitting a young-reader book, choose words that children ages six to nine will understand. In many picture books humor plays an important role. Children enjoy hearing a book that makes them laugh or giggle.

(How many times will a child ask you to read the same book?) Make sure that the jokes are age appropriate, as well as the reading difficulty. Kids laugh at kooky things. They like visual jokes, corny jokes, silly riddles, far-fetched situations, quick thinking, and the traditional pie in the face slapstick comedy.

Nonsense, absurdity, and exaggerations work for kids. For more information in preparing your stories for children, check out our Insider's Secrets: What You MUST Know To Submit Your Children's Book.